修改：It felt like Penelope’s web, waking up
early in the morning knowing I had to write at least one passage a day. To
alleviate the occasional overwhelming apprehension, my initial strategy was to
jot down whatever thoughts came to mind during the writing process. This served
as a mind-easing technique and helped me navigate the early stages of writing.

服了！服了！

这两段看完，你大概就知道ChatGPT的水平了。总体来说，ChatGPT可以优化一些英语的表达、替换一些词的用法，并且往往可以找出更贴切你想表达意思的方案，在很多地方仿佛在提示你“我们会这样表达哦”。有这些其实就足以成为你的优秀英文教练了，可以不断帮助你提供英语使用的流畅程度。

记得我在大一的时候，为了提高英语，有一段时间挺困惑的，我还专门找我的大学英语老师帮忙修改我的英文文章。那个时候，我为了练习我新学会的词，刻意在文章中使用，老师还对此批评了。不过由于有老师的指点与修改，这段时间我进步很快。

现在我的感慨是，如果我大学时代，有ChatGPT就好了,我一定会把ChatGPT的内功学过来的，那列位现在看到的就是一个中英双语畅销书作家了！

最后附上ChatGPT给我修改的原文、对比截图以及ChatGPT的修改概要。

ChatGPT还有什么好用法，欢迎在评论区分享。

原文参见《[342]Whatever you deliver speaks for you》

修改后的文本参见

At the beginning of this year, fueled by
inspiration and a tentative determination, I embarked on the journey of writing
articles. I wasn’t certain how far I could go, but one thing was clear: I could
handle writing within the short-term deadlines ahead of me, considering my
familiarity with topics such as English learning and interpretation.

It felt like Penelope’s web, waking up
early in the morning knowing I had to write at least one passage a day. To
alleviate the occasional overwhelming apprehension, my initial strategy was to
jot down whatever thoughts came to mind during the writing process. This served
as a mind-easing technique and helped me navigate the early stages of writing.

However, deep down, I recognized that
merely satisfying my own needs wouldn’t be enough to captivate and engage the
public. There would always be a trade-off between the topics I wanted to write
about and the quality required for an article to become widely read and shared.

Throughout this journey, I have worked
diligently to strike a balance and achieve coordination. The need for such
balance has grown as the number of subscribers to my WeChat Official Account
has reached a record high of over 10,000.

Recently, during a conversation with a
friend in Beijing, he emphasized the importance of organizing and preparing
every article on my public account. This includes paying attention to even the
smallest details, such as layout, diction, and the selection of related photos.
Each piece of information should hold value for the reader since they have
taken the time to open my passage and therefore deserve a rewarding experience.

This conversation provided me with great
inspiration. I recalled the advice my supervisor gave me when I graduated from
school and entered the workforce. He emphasized that everything you deliver
speaks for you. In your team, the results you produce and present to others
represent you. Your credibility is built on the quality of your work. Failing
to meet others’ expectations often leads to a bleak career prospect.

The principle is simple, yet fully
understanding and implementing it is far from easy. Our laziness and inertia
often hold us back from taking the initiative and achieving excellence. We
frequently settle for mediocrity with excuses like “this is good
enough” or “I am tired and need a break.”

However, in the realm of team
collaboration, success can only be achieved when all members give their all. An
individual’s reputation also relies on consistently delivering high-quality
work in the long term.

Therefore, it is crucial to ensure that
every detail counts.

对照的文本参见

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